Hello again all my friends and fiends.
It is time for another Six Sentence Sunday tidbit.
Today, I give you six sentences of a work in progress to tease and tantalize your interest.
In my last offering we were with Jacob Devlin and Emily full of love on a hot afternoon.
Today, while lying in her love and master's arms, she recalls a different time. A time before they were lovers, when the boundaries of friendship and passion first blurred.
The first time he kissed her.
Ever
since she had been a little girl, there had been a hole in her where darkness
and pain roared. It beat at her from the inside.
When
Jacob kissed her, for the first time that she could remember, the hole had
been quiet. The silence had been deafening…and a blessing.
She
gave him the only response she had in her. She wanted the peace inside again,
wanted passion to drown out the pain.
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Nice! I want so much more . . .
ReplyDeleteThis is a poignant and emotive snippet, well described.
ReplyDeleteOh, Jp, that was so subtle, so moving.....almost painful. I lost my breath on the line, "a hole in her where darkness and pain roared." As she wants more, to still the roar, I want more to fill the appetite you have created in me. Wonderful 6.:) xo
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Jp. Very powerful. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful and emotionally gripping. To feel that pain and allow it to be silenced for any length of time speaks volumes.
ReplyDeleteLove the emotion behind the sensuality. Well done!
ReplyDeleteQuite an emotional reaction to a kiss.
ReplyDelete"passion to drown out the pain." I'm in love with this 6
ReplyDeleteshe's every girl, but such a mystery