Friday, September 2, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #2 "Fallen Star"




“CUT!”
Jennifer ran for the bathroom off-set. She needed to freshen up in a bad way. She couldn’t believe she was doing this. Starring in a cheap, after hours, adult movie for a cable channel. Once, she’d been a star. Now, well, she had to do what she had to do.
“I don’t have to fuck her do I?” Her co-star asked outside the door. “Did you see those tracks?”
“Why do you think we put her in the jacket? No man, no real sex.” the director.
A tear slipped from her eye as the needle slid in her vein.


9 comments:

  1. What a great story in just a few short words. I actually felt sorry for this blond bitch!! Wonderful:) xo

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  2. Whoa! Just, whoa! So much drama in 100 words. I think everyone hated the blond beyotch in this weeks photo. You humanized her. Great job!! I'm gushing, really, really wonderful.

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  3. Brilliant! Yup, I would never have thought of that twist. I just took an instant dislike to the poor woman the moment I saw the pic... :(

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  4. Wow, a good spin on the picture. Loved it. Bonni Sansom

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  5. Thank you everyone. Love the feed back. Very validating.

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  6. I almost wanted to cry when I read this. I like your spin, Jp! Loved it! Love ya!

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  7. Jp, you have definitely got the hang of this whole FFF thing. You told a real story in only 100 words. I am very, very impressed. Nicely done, nicely done indeed.

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  8. OMG - 100 words was all it took for my mouth to drop open and my mind to be sent into a tailspin. Well done JP - I am totally godsmacked - bravo.

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