Friday, August 26, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday #1

Welcome to my first Flash Fiction Friday...
A picture says a thousand words, but I am only allowed 100. Hope you enjoy my contribution.

She shouldn’t be doing this, she was a married woman. He pushed all twenty buttons. Twenty floors, thirty seconds between floors, a ten minute ride. Kara’s pussy tingled.
Elevator closed. Fly opened. His stiff cock filled her hand.
Ding. The door opened, second floor. His hands, full of ass, lifting her.
Ding. Kara impaled.
Ding. Legs around his waist.
Ding. Sucking her nipple fiercely.
Ding. Ding. Ding.
Ding. Harder.
Ding. Faster.
Ding. Shocked guest!
Ding. Ding. Ding.
Ding. Hotter, wetter.
Ding. Closer.
Ding. Almost there!
Ding. Ding. Ding.
Ding. Kara screamed her pleasure!
Penthouse.
Her husband smiled. “Happy Anniversary, Baby.”

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5 comments:

  1. Oh, that was a good one. Poor shocked guest.

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  2. That was really good!! I wonder if the security footage will end up on YouTube. Wait here, I'll check. Loved it!!

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  3. I loved it!! That was so cleverly executed with the ding, ding, dings!! And the shocked guest....did they get on the elevator and watch or better yet ... join in?? Happy Anniversary, indeed:) xo

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  4. Ding-Dong, Ding-Fucking-Dong; that must have been one wild elevator ride. Ok, so my naughty imagination is wondering whose voice was it saying "Happy Anniversary, Baby." The man in the elevator with her on the man waiting in the penthouse when the elevator doors opened?? A very cool first FFF post Ms. A - Nicely done.

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  5. I knew you all would LOVE it! Great work, Jp! Well done indead! You sucked me in all they way to the last ding! xo

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